In Room 20, we have been learning to upgrade/improve comments. Today i want to show you a comment I have improved.
I think you should introduce yourself in a comment because you are going to want to let the reader to know who you are first.
If you want to let the reader comment on your blog in return, you can add the link to your blog so they can access your blog.
The link to the blog that i got the comment: http://odscharlottel.blogspot.co.nz/2016/06/science-journal.html#comment-form
Kia ora Vaughn,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Megan, and I will be one of the people blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning Journey. I am really impressed with the suggestions you have made as to how to improve your comments. I am definitely going to use your advice so I can be more helpful to the students participating in the Summer Learning Journey.
I am thrilled that you've registered for the Summer Learning Journey with us. I know it can sometimes be tricky to get started. I have included a link to the week one activities, but remember, you can do them in any order! Check out the activities on our website, and then post your responses to the activities here on your blog site.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/week-one
I am so excited to read more of your posts!
Have a lovely day,
Megan :)